Sunday, 2 May 2010
Evaluation
I have made sure that the digipak design and poster design complemented the video, to try and do this i used screen shots from the video to use in the designs for my poster and cd cover. This makes sure that there is a relationship between all of the products i have designed. You would recognise that these products are connected. When i was making the designs for the posters and digipaks i was all the time thinking about the video and how i could link it back to video so they are designed as a set.
The audience feedback we have learned that we have done many things well but there are still points that we could have changed to make our video better. One of the major bits of criticism we received and would have liked to have changed would have been the shots of Natalie inside. They where thought to have been too dark and didn't get across the feeling we wanted it too. We would have liked to filmed it again but we couldn't because of time restraints. Another bit of negative feedback we got back was about the last shot at the end of the film when it goes to the scene across the lake. We liked that last shot because we thinks it sets the scene at the end and puts the air of doubt about the end rather that ending on the shot of the ripples on the lake. The last piece of criticism was about the very beginning because of the close up of the name Nero way that could seem to be important to the story where as it is just the name of the road. The rest of the feedback was very positive. People seemed to like the idea behind the story i think it is because most people could relate to it, being the emotion and the passion. They also like the way that we carried out the ideas that we had. Audience liked the effects we had used to show more of the tension that was being built up in the song and the video.
I used different forms of technology throughout my project, I think it started with the use of youtube to look at other music videos, YouTube makes it very simple to see a lot of music videos without charge and quickly. The main piece of technology used was used to edit our video. For this we used Final Cut Pro, The editing software from apple. During my AS course I made a video for my website and i used windows movie maker, Final cut pro is a more professional software and meant we could complete our video to a high standard. We found it hard to use at the beginning of the editing process but it got easier the more we used it. James was at the controls throughout editing but we where all there to make the decisions and all learned how to use the equipment. The hardest points to do with the editing was the time it to complete to the standard we expected of ourselves. There where many points where we new what we wanted to do but we didn't have the knowledge to do it. In these cases we used an Internet guide to see firstly if it was possible and secondly how it was to be done. There are many effects on Final Cut Pro, we played around with them but there weren't many of them that we used because we didn't like the effect they gave. We used live type to get the writing at the beginning and the end of the video on there. Using a different programme meant there where many choices of typing that we could have gone with but we went with the very simple white text. When we had finished our video we put it onto Facebook and youtube so we could get some more audience feedback from those sources. I used photoshop to make the computer designs for my digipak and poster. I had used this programme last year so i had in idea of how it worked so it made it easier to get the effects that i was looking for. The resulting effects of that is that they where relativity quick to make and to a good standard product. Because of the lack of footage I found it hard to evaluate what we had done to the storyboard because there where shots we had planned to go on for longer that we couldn't stretch to do. This means that the video appears very different to the storyboard but we did have allot of the same shots that we had planned.
I have very much enjoyed the proses of planning and making our music video, I have learned mostly about the importance of planning. This doesn't mean we got it all right as we didn't plan exactly how much footage we would need. At points we where struggling for footage and had to use the footage we had creatively to get enough to fill the length of our long song. We also had to add extra shots from our story line as that didn't give us enough time. We should have also tried to get our video completed sooner so we could have had more time to make changed e.g. film different shots. We did start early with our filming to try and have it completed well before the deadline but because of the trouble we had with editing to start with we where quite close to the deadline. The genre of the song effected the story that we ended up shooting, the love theme is much more apt to the indie style rather than say Rap that would have a very different story for the video. By having James in our group this also helped us understand the genre more and how the video shpuld look.
Saturday, 1 May 2010
Production diary
Tuesday, 27 April 2010
Audience feedback
We watched our video as a media group and then handed out the questionnaire and retrieved the feedback. Most of the feedback was very possessive with people appreciating the emotion and the story line. The thing that came from the questionnaires was the shots of Natalie inside as they where thought to be too dark. We would have liked to have changed it but there wasn't enough time at this point to film it again.
Planning
Firstly we chose the song that we would make the video too and get the permission. We chose to use a song from one of the members of our group who is also in a band. The genre is indie and this will effect the style of the video and how it will look in the end. James Cottam is a member of Delayed Finality and we are using there song Thanks For Nothing, because of using a song of James's this would give us a greater understanding of the song. It would also give us access to the band and a fresh recording of the song.
Initial Ideas
Idea 1
A full performance video of the band shot in one location. Lots of shots taken from various angles and long slow cuts are used to match the pace of the song. The camera gives slightly more focus to the lead singer due to his importance in the song. This video will be similar in style to the music video for “Great Expectations” by the Gas Light anthem in that it is focused entirely on the band.
Idea 2
A combination of a narrative and performance video. The narrative would show two teenagers who have an argument, one walks out leaving the other one to try and cheer himself up in his house, after a while the boy leaves on a motorbike. Throughout the narrative shots would switch to the band performing on a lit stage. The boy will then arrive outside a building on his bike before going in to a theatre and watching the band, he quietly takes his seat, as the band finish the camera reveals him as the only member of the audience.
Idea 3
A Full narrative video, taking ideas for the narrative from idea, but expands on the narrative and cuts the performance elements out. Two characters have an argument as before, but this is extended and shows the argument from more angles. The character searching for something enjoyable to do is shown but the character is made out to be more desperate. Near the end he rides his motorbike to a theatre, which has a poster outside saying “Crayola” live. The narrative then ends.
We started the planning for our music video with some initial ideas and from then have the final idea for the video. One idea was to hold a race with the love interest against her partner racing. This fitting to the song title "Thanks for nothing" as he has one the race but no thanks to his partner. This was going to be our final idea but there where a few issues so we couldn't go through with it. One of the members of our group didn't have access to his car and another member of our group left school so this left us unable to carry out this idea. This is directly where the idea or our video was born as it is very similar. Once we had the idea we made a story board to show all the shots and this we used later during the shoots to make sure we had all the shots we needed. We also thought that this idea would appeal to the target audience as we are targeting 15-26 males and we think the driving and the passion would appeal to them.
Camera Shots
Music video
Digipac
This is my third design, it uses an image of the band in an informal band practise situation. I used this picture because Delayed Finality is an Indie Rock band so this is the image that people has of Indie bands. The name of the single is large against and in black and against the white background. This means that it stands out and can be easily seen
For this CD cover i have used an image of the main character from the video but not from the video, I have used it in black and white to show the passion, even the writing is white so there is no colour on the whole of the cover so it all sticks to the theme.
This first design for my Digipak involved an extreme close up of the lead characters eyes taken directly from the video, it simply has the name of the band and and the song. I chose to use that image because it is the main character and it goes to show some of the emotion and the passion of the song and video.

similar style to the song that we are using in our video. The pictures are
in black and white instantly showing something about the songs before
they have been listened too. The pictures show the band in a shoot
rather than with there instruments this is to get across the personality
of the band not just there music.

Our song, this is a different style of cover to the first as it doesn’t
feature the band. It has an image that supports the name and the style of the song with the main colour of the cover being red. The CD inside is the same style of the rest of the pack The biggest writing on the pack is the band name and the song is small.